文章摘要：初中寫(xiě)人作文:怎么寫(xiě)好幫助有前科的人開(kāi)始新生活700字作文？【內(nèi)容提示】對(duì)于犯錯(cuò)誤的人或以前服過(guò)刑的罪犯應(yīng)該采取什么態(tài)度呢。是排斥還是幫助。有的人可能采取前一種態(tài)度，有的人則會(huì)采用后一種態(tài)度。試想，這兩種態(tài)度會(huì)帶來(lái)什么結(jié)果呢。顯然會(huì)出現(xiàn)兩種結(jié)果。請(qǐng)結(jié)合你平時(shí)經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一些事情對(duì)比說(shuō)明上述兩種情況。以下是余楠寫(xiě)的《幫助有前科的人開(kāi)始新生活》范文；

好幫助有前科的人開(kāi)始新生活作文700字概況

• 作者：余楠
• 班級(jí)：初中初二
• 字?jǐn)?shù)：700字作文
• 體裁：寫(xiě)人
• 段落：分19段敘寫(xiě)
• 更新：2022年12月12日 11時(shí)21分

初中初中寫(xiě)人作文700字   余楠   杭州市 初中初二學(xué)生（2）班

【內(nèi)容提示】

對(duì)于犯錯(cuò)誤的人或以前服過(guò)刑的罪犯應(yīng)該采取什么態(tài)度呢？是排斥還是幫助？有的人可能采取前一種態(tài)度，有的人則會(huì)采用后一種態(tài)度。試想，這兩種態(tài)度會(huì)帶來(lái)什么結(jié)果呢？顯然會(huì)出現(xiàn)兩種結(jié)果。請(qǐng)結(jié)合你平時(shí)經(jīng)歷過(guò)的一些事情對(duì)比說(shuō)明上述兩種情況。

【作文示范】

Help Ex-cons①Start New Life

I once read a story about a person who was put into prison for his bad behavior. After serving his time in prison, he returned home.“How can you have the face to come home, go away!”his angry father shouted at him. Two months later, he was put into prison again for stealing.

I also read a story about a different person in the same situation, but when he returned to his village, no one looked down upon him, and people helped him find a job to make a living. Five years later, he became a millionaire②and contributed to the building of a school in his hometown.

Different attitudes produce different results.

Generally speaking, after reeducation③ most people have learnt their lessons and find a legal④ way to support themselves through honest labour. When returning to society, only a few returned to their old ways. But even though the number of the ex-felons⑤ who return to a life of crime is below 8 per cent, we should understand that these repeated offences are much worse than first offences.

The task of guiding these people is a job that belongs not only to the persons themselves and their families, but is a task the whole society should confront⑥.

（選自1999年1月27日《英文21世紀(jì)報(bào)》）

【詞語(yǔ)解釋】

①ex-con[eks 'k&n] n．以前的罪犯；有前科者

②millionaire[?milj+'n#+] n．百萬(wàn)富翁

③reeducation['ri:edju(:)'keiM+n] n．再教育

④legal['li:g+l] adj．法律（上）的

⑤ex-felon[eks-'fel+n] n．重罪人，重罪犯

⑥ confront[k+n'fr)nt] v．（使）面對(duì)，（使）面臨

【寫(xiě)法指要】

本文是一篇對(duì)比型說(shuō)明文，即對(duì)照兩個(gè)人或事物的不同點(diǎn)。文章采用綜合法（all-about pattern）開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地對(duì)所討論的問(wèn)題作了對(duì)比：第一段寫(xiě)對(duì)有前科者的不正確態(tài)度；第二段寫(xiě)對(duì)這類(lèi)人員的正確態(tài)度，經(jīng)緯分明。第三、四段是作者做出的總結(jié)和結(jié)論。第五段寫(xiě)作者的建議。

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作者：初中初二學(xué)生（2）班 余楠   時(shí)間：2022-12-12 11:21